Wednesday 7 April 2010

NaPoWriMo #7 - they had been standing kissing



they had been standing kissing

a blue cardigan and a black toggle coat
the click of tangled buttons
they stumble closer trying to undo the mess
she is thinking how smooth his face is on hers
and about the love of another

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4 comments:

  1. J. D. Mackenzie7 April 2010 at 20:47

    very auditory... I'm hearing these sounds and also reminded that attraction can be complex.

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  2. Wayne Pitchko7 April 2010 at 22:47

    nicely done tanka Sophie

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  3. Sophie F Baker7 April 2010 at 23:47

    Thanks very much - comments and encouragement always appreciated!

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  4. Anonymous8 April 2010 at 01:13

    that was deliciously poetic.... how close we are yet so far apart in the moment... happy day 7!! erotic engine

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