Wednesday, 7 April 2010

NaPoWriMo #7 - they had been standing kissing



they had been standing kissing

a blue cardigan and a black toggle coat
the click of tangled buttons
they stumble closer trying to undo the mess
she is thinking how smooth his face is on hers
and about the love of another

4 comments:

  1. very auditory... I'm hearing these sounds and also reminded that attraction can be complex.

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  2. Thanks very much - comments and encouragement always appreciated!

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  3. that was deliciously poetic.... how close we are yet so far apart in the moment... happy day 7!! erotic engine

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